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Help us improve our memoirs!
In this project, we have created our personal memoirs in both English and our native languages. To share our work, we have uploaded a written and oral version so that many people can enjoy our work!
The work presented is still in draft form, and we will continue to improve the quality of our work through the feedback and questions provided by readers/listeners! Please comment with compliments, suggestions and questions for us.
[All names have been changed to protect student privacy and all comments will be moderated by school staff.]
you did really well.
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I think you should talk about your friends and school in Pakistan.
Your story was really well described and I really thought that you did a good job but try to talk about your social life as well.
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