Andy
age 18.
Guatemala
My
name is Andy I am from Guatemala I am 18 years old. I lived in a small
place of Guatemala and I feel comfortable living in my house with my
brothers and mother. and near my house there is a park. and when we left school
I and my cousins we were going to play soccer in the park. but me and my
cousins go to first in the park because other people go to the park and we can
win the park. and when playing soccer with my brother I fought with my brothers
but spending days my mother told me that if i want to go new york and I told my
mom I was gonna think about it. But part of me wanted to go to the United
States because my father lived in the US, and well, I wanted to go to get to
know my father better. On the other hand, I didn’t want to go because I
knew that I wouldn’t see my mother and my brothers. But I made the decision and
I said to my mom that I wanted to go to the United States. I was going to miss
my friends and my school.
When I went to New York I said goodbye to my brothers and mother.
I said goodbye to all of my family. I felt really sad when I said goodbye to my
family because I knew that I wasn’t going to see them anymore but I wanted to
see my father so make a decision to go to new York. When I went to Mexico I was
very sad because I missed my family and when when I
went to Mexico did one day on the way to arrive. when I got to Mexico I stayed
living there for 5 days with a uncles of my father but I did not
know I had family living in Mexico but uncles are good with me But the
days passed. I went to Mexico for another place but on the way the car
was ruined and we were sleeping in a hotel while totaled the car but all the
way my uncles went with me. when we went to inquire about the car they said its
not ready and we had to wait another day And then we had to wait again
and then we went out to lunch with my uncles compare and depues AL hotel we
went to rest to leave the next day and then we continue our way to Los Angeles.
When
Los Angeles were very beautiful with large buildings. I lived for 3 weeks in
Los Angeles but my father lived in new york I had to go to new york but it was
a long road but new york when i go to new york I saw many beautiful places I
ate many different meals and was also very happy because I was going to meet my
father and I could not wait any longer to see my father to see how it was
father and was very anxious but I had to wait because sap that was a long way
down the road I spent many things I met different people and many types of food
and many, very many places that thought never know and passing the days I
was coming to new york but was nervous at the same sad look nervous because I
was going to meet my father because what a way not seen a long time we left a
long time I was about 8 years old when he left us and sad because I knew there
was going to see my mother because I cared when I was small and my brothers
playing and sometimes arguing but missed them so much
When
I was going to new york I feel nervous because it was a new life I would lead
in new york and also because I had to learn another language and meet new
people and i feel happy because I was going to meet my father and when I left
the car I saw my dad and I began to mourn for joy because a route never seen in
person was a moment of joy for me and then me and my father went to the house
to rest and the next day my cousin came to know
and
I went with my cousin to walk and went to visit many places and then we went to
buy clothes we were walking all day and the next day went with my cousin to the
park
playing football and met others who were friends
of my cousin but they spoke another language I did not understand but it was
fun to play football But when he was alone at home I feel sad Because I
could not be with my brothers and my mother And could only talk to my family on
the phone I felt very sad and at first did not trust with my father because
they knew him well one day my father spoke with me and told me if I already
wanted to go to school I said no because I'm afraid to go to school and not
knowing anyone and another thing I did not know any English I felt very scared
but I had to go to school but had to go to school knowing where he was to study
met was a very large and beautiful school when it was my first day at school
was a little nervous because it was to meet new people and I would hear other
languages and when I left school I talked to my mom on the phone and I
feel very sad when talked with my mom in
the phone and for me at first I was a little difficult to School
Because I do not understand the other languages and sometimes I would go
home and watch TV but I don't know when i see my family
do not know when I will see my family again.
Good story!!! you should read it again and fix the mistakes.
ReplyDeleteGood job, I like tour story, but you need fix mistakes.
ReplyDeleteI like your story but you have to fix your spelling and give more information about your family and your school in Guatemala.
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