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Friday, April 24, 2015

65 Alazel Shoaib (Yemen, Age ): English

            Hello my name is Alizei Sheaibi I was born in Sheaibi city of Dali in south yemen.
I born in 7/7/1999.
            South yemen is one country of middle east world. Aden is the capital city of the country,also Aden it’s have good climate is not too cold in the winter,But is too hot in summer,some time the weather is 125 . Aden is most beautiful city in north and south yemen. Aden is a capital of 8 or more state, one of them is my state that call(DALI)  in shib town. Thats the city and state that i grow up and went there and have good time with my all freind and family. In MARCH 18 2011 I went to North yemen and went to the immigration. In first day of me in senna city in north yemen it was so bad.Also that day it was too cold, I can’t believe in i am in yemen,I was think i am in America because is too cold in north side of yemen. Also in the first time I want there I was saw it most beautiful,But when i went there more in one time,is doesn't look to me good any more.  I went to the immigration of U.S in Sanaa city,they take from me and my brother (saltin) my mom (Anisa) and my father (mohammed),They take from us the (D-N-A).
After they done for it.. they said we have to wait one more week.We set in sanna city one more week,we went back after one week.and they tell me to we have to pay for the Sdsen.We pay and everthing it was cool,and nice.My mom,My dad,they was so happy…
            After that I have my Sd Son we went back to our sweet city and town (Aden city of DALI town).
            After we went back to south side of yemen.I went to finish of my school years of 8 grade,Finally  am DONE of my school years,Me and MY family we went to the town,to see our friend and family.
Before we came here me and my father …
In back home we went to different town and state we was have good time…
            I went to the park  in yemen with my mom and we play to mush from 10 in the morning into 9 in the night ..me and my mom we eat and drank at the park with my father and brother…
            The most place that where I went to is:
1-Capital city of south yemen (ADEN).
2-DELHI capital city of shaib...
3- capital city of north yemen (SANAA).
4-School that  I study over there.
5-The park that name of it (mahye aden)
6-mosq this that where i went to pray.
7- The school driving…

After I had my Sd Sen. me Hussein and my mom Anisa my father mohamed and my little brother Saltein. We leave the immigration around 1:45 pm.
We went to eat at the restaurant and also start  to think about going back in same day to aden. In that day I feel so tired because i am in the immigration sens 7:30am  into 1:45pm.
My father want us to going back in same day,But my mom she don’t to…,They start fighting, I said to them okay no problem you and my mom just sleep and i am gonna drive the car…
So I driver the car and my father and my mom sleep and me i driver the car and took to my brother..
soon my brother he felt in sleep two.., now just me that i don’t sleep i was driving all way don’t even stop almost 5 hours..
            Finally I get our home in aden city and they was sleep i told them wake up we in aden already…,my father said stop playboy,continue driving i  said continue to where?
            He open his eyes and he said what !? he said good job boy.. we get home at aden city at 1:30am in the night … after in we are in aden city in one hours in sanaa in same place that we was leaving own it happened big problem over there.. at the place that we was leave own it.
           
            We went inside our house in aden city, I was so tired after almost 8 hours driving,
my head was I can not feel it.
            After we went inside the house no one want to sleep because they all sleep when i was driving, I set with them my mom my dad and my brother and I said goodnight to them and i went to sleep.
            Next day at 2:00pm I wake up,and no one in home i just by myself… I call them and they answer and said we are in the beach …
When she answer me i went back to slept.
            In MY Traveling star I had a lot of change… I  will let you know some of it …
First thing of my characterization was my brother, He change  befor i get my se desn he was don’t like to talk to me. After i get my se desn he was like to be with me,also he was want to go with me any where i went to…. Be for he was hat by a lot and then he star like me liter by liter unto he was told my brother I will miss you…  
           
            The scene change it was with my mom, be for she was fighting with me for no reason, even if I don’t do anything she fighting all time. After my dad tell her in he  gonna  take me with him , She star to be nice to me, end even if I do something wrong she don’t fighting she just say okay no problem and this one the most important thing  that really change.
            The third change in my story it was me.Befor I know In I will going to America , I was sat home all day, I don’t like to go any where. But after I know in I will leave to America with my father, I started to going out with my best friend and my family.
            I start my traveling from Capital  Aden city… I take the Royal Jordanian plane I take it from Aden city unto Jordanian, Is take me long trab unot Jordanian is take me 18 12 hours start up.
Over there We take a break for like 2 hours and we continue to travel to united state of American . We take same Airplane that call Royal Jordanian plane is take me 6 hours from Jordanian unto New York city.

On First day in New York City was suprised me a lot but I was don’t like because I miss my sweet country,also in next day was so good but I was cry because I miss my mom and everybody in my town and city. After one week in New york City I star like little bit by little bit but After one month I love it but no like my country
After three month I went to apply in school,and from school to another they was send me.
And finally I get to INTERNATIONAL HIGH SCHOOL AT LAFAYETTE. I start my school year no English no nothign but the teacther they help me alot to improve my langugae and I do improvet….
Thank you for reading my story…..qq
Also Thanks so much to the INTERNATIONAL HIGH SCHOOL AT LAFAYETTE  teacher for help me to improve my language………..



5 comments:

  1. I like the way you describe your Immigration.

    you should add more about your country

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  2. I like how you describe you county

    I think you have to check capital letters

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  3. I liked your memoir, because it had many details and it was really nice conclusion to thank teachers.
    If you do it again, pay attention on capitalization.

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  4. I liked your memoir, because it had many details and it was really nice conclusion to thank teachers.
    If you do it again, pay attention on capitalization.

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  5. I liked your story it's so interesting.

    I think you should make some letters in small size.

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