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Zamz
Age 15, Pakistan
Hello my name is Zamz. I am 15 years old. I was born in Sialkot Pakistan. I lived with my family. I live with five people in my family. And I have one brother he is 17 years old. And I have one sister she is 8 years old. My cousin like pets to bring at home. Like cat and pejan. But his father don’t like pets. And he likes racing on bikes and wheeling. My mother have many work at home. Like cooking, clean house, washing clothes and e.t.c. I had so many friends in Pakistan. I use to play with them a lot of games like cricket, video games, hide seek. Then my Parents decided to move in other house. We had in our house in Pakistan. We changed our house and we moved in my Grandmother house for some reason. I had a lot of fun there. I had a lot of relatives who use to come in my Grandmother's house we played altogether and having fun. In Pakistan school teachers was so strict at school. My Uncle came from USA to Pakistan. Uncle like to play cricket. After four days. My all cousin over there to meet Uncle. We all played too much cricket at same day. My friends call me and my brother a every Sunday in morning to play cricket. We played cricket near friend house. We have a enemy he have a shop he sell shake and biscuit and tea.
Eight years ago. Near our house we have big place. Where we grow vegetables. House of the back there have big Park. Park back wall were broken sometimes we went to play cricket. There was shops. In our house we grow plants and flower. Plants like fruits and vegetables. Flower like rose, jasmine flower and e.t.c. Near my Grandmother house there grocery store and clothes shop. And bakery shops and ground. There was hospital. Near medical shops. And Islamabad embassy roads like jungle. My Uncle house in New Jersey there near Lake and jungle.
I saw flowers, trees, bakery shops. I like to eat too much sweet. In village in afternoon there was so much noise because when the trucks moving. In was city not quite because motorcycle and trucks have too much sound.
My Uncle applied for America. All of my family and I waited for a visa for 12 years. I went for medical the doctor gave me nine shots. The medicine expired and we went again and he gave again seven more shots. I went two times to the Islamabad embassy with my family and immigration asked many question. After two weeks we got passport. And I went my father get tickets. They I went airport with my family and cousin. The airport security checked all our bags. Then I went inside the airplane. I was siting first time in airplane. I felt scared. The airplane reached to Abu Dhabi the security checked all paper for checking. After four hours we went to the airplane. And airplane flew to Abu Dhabi after 12 hours. The airplane landed at JFK airport. My Uncle and cousin they pick my family. The Uncle house was in New Jersey. I slept in the car. After two months I came to New York. And I came to my aunt’s house.
First day in my New Jersey was good. Because I meet with new cousin. In the afternoon we play cricket with my Uncle. After four days we went with cousin to see the store. The store name is Nutrition zone. Inside the store they have many kinds of proteins like build muscles, make more weight and proteins bars, muscles milk and protein bread and bills and e.t.c. They have four stores. Where there his friends work. And we played playstation we late night like 2:00pm we played wwe game its fighting game. We have many fun. In New Jersey. After two or three months we came New York city we came my Aunt house. And my Mom and dad went again Pakistan for some reasons. For two months. Then they came back USA. My Mom and cousin went education department for applied for school and they tell my brother and me “ You will go International at Lafayette.” And my sister go PS212 Lady Deborah moody school. And now we live in New York.
I liked how you describe what you did to your friends and cousin together but
ReplyDeleteI think you should talk about your school in Pakistan. If you talk about your school it will make your memoir better.