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Wednesday, April 22, 2015

527 Lucas (Uzbekistan, Age 15): English


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                 Lucas
   Age 15 Uzbekistan
In my family we are five people, my father, mother and two brothers. My fathers name is Bakhtiyor.  He is 42 years old, my  mothers name is Shakhlo and she is 40 years old, my little brothers name is Miki  and he 11 years old, my big brothers name is Cristiano and he 18 years old.
We are lived in Uzbekistan, we had a very big house, About animals I had a two rabbits, they were big and white. We have studied at school and my parents worked at store and I participated to soccer and my house had a second floor and many many trees, flowers, we had a blue car. We were happy.
At 10:00 PM I went to somewhere to get passport, if I don’t get the passport. I will not come to United states thats why. Then I registered, after one month I got my passport. It was so hard that to get passport.
We all went to airport to get to United States, first get to scan and get five ticket for airplane and we filled out permission slip then we ate some food then we got into the airplane, the Airplane flew eight- nine hours, I felt so cool, this happen at 02:00 AM.
The Airplane sit on the ground at airport of United States and we get out from airplane and find our baggages, that was so hard find our baggages. My friendship helped us because we did not know find where locations are. And he drive us to he’s home. We stayed 2 days. In two days we tried to find home for us and we walked outside.
We moved to our new home It was nice home I like that. Our home is near to ocean, its so cool for me and we get acquainted with neighborhoods and learned about the locations thats a necessary. And we buyed things for home, and I registered to high school with my little brother. I was in 9th grade, my brother is in 4th grade and we got alot of friends.

2 comments:

  1. Your story is interesting!
    I think you should talk more about your experience in Uzbekistan. And also make sure next time you focus on your editing part.

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  2. You did good job. But you need more details and editing.

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