ABOUBOUHAM
17 YEAR OLD , Haiti
My family try to do everything that to make us happy at all times. In family only my dad was
working and my mom use to do all the chores like cleaning the floor do the laundry. In my house
we had no cleaning machine so my mom had to buy a mop we had clean water but we didn’t
have that much of tap water it was easy for us because there was a church next to my house and
the church had a pomp in it. in my neighborhood there was no cleaning machine so my mom had
to do laundry with her hand.Long time ago like in 2006 me and my dad were hold by the
ambassador they didn’t want to give us our paper . When my dad told us we got the paper we
were so happy but my dad say that i can not tell anyone about me and him getting our paper
because some might get jealous and do something bad to me.
I live in Port Au Prince Matissant 17# 27 my neighborhood wasn’t bad There was a big
building in front of my house the building was a school but when the earthquake everyone was
scared I even heard them saying that the going to close the school down but the school didn’t
break down so they decided to leave the school. In Haiti the earthquake was really bad it break a
lot of houses and also it kills a lot of people. My family was safe but only my God father was hit
in the head by a rock but he didn’t die. after the earthquake finished everything was back
together. I go to church every day with my family . We had a tv but electricity least for 2 hours
and blackout so thats why we ad buy a battery. In my country its hard to get a job only if you
have a good degree or if you have a friend there he might get you that a job.
This part its about me going to united state. When I came to united state I was
excited but when I see everyone was going to school and I was staying home because I didn’t
speak english. I had to live with my grandma. when me and my dad were coming to U.S we take
a airplane for 3 hours or plus. When I first got united state I was very excited then I had to go to
school. I went to in United State but I didn’t know English but when I got to 8 grade I knew a
little bit of english. For me I didn’t think english would be so hard. but when I got there it was a
little bit hard and I always have someone to bully me .
17 YEAR OLD , Haiti
My family try to do everything that to make us happy at all times. In family only my dad was
working and my mom use to do all the chores like cleaning the floor do the laundry. In my house
we had no cleaning machine so my mom had to buy a mop we had clean water but we didn’t
have that much of tap water it was easy for us because there was a church next to my house and
the church had a pomp in it. in my neighborhood there was no cleaning machine so my mom had
to do laundry with her hand.Long time ago like in 2006 me and my dad were hold by the
ambassador they didn’t want to give us our paper . When my dad told us we got the paper we
were so happy but my dad say that i can not tell anyone about me and him getting our paper
because some might get jealous and do something bad to me.
I live in Port Au Prince Matissant 17# 27 my neighborhood wasn’t bad There was a big
building in front of my house the building was a school but when the earthquake everyone was
scared I even heard them saying that the going to close the school down but the school didn’t
break down so they decided to leave the school. In Haiti the earthquake was really bad it break a
lot of houses and also it kills a lot of people. My family was safe but only my God father was hit
in the head by a rock but he didn’t die. after the earthquake finished everything was back
together. I go to church every day with my family . We had a tv but electricity least for 2 hours
and blackout so thats why we ad buy a battery. In my country its hard to get a job only if you
have a good degree or if you have a friend there he might get you that a job.
This part its about me going to united state. When I came to united state I was
excited but when I see everyone was going to school and I was staying home because I didn’t
speak english. I had to live with my grandma. when me and my dad were coming to U.S we take
a airplane for 3 hours or plus. When I first got united state I was very excited then I had to go to
school. I went to in United State but I didn’t know English but when I got to 8 grade I knew a
little bit of english. For me I didn’t think english would be so hard. but when I got there it was a
little bit hard and I always have someone to bully me .
i like your story but u need to write more in your essay
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i like your story, but you should really fix your grammar and too much space between the paragraph, i also want to know why the people were bullying you?
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