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Wednesday, April 29, 2015

638 Hatim (Morocco, Age 18): English


hatim
age 17 morroco

My name is hatim .I  lived in Morocco. I was 17 years old. I
wish from my childhood to be something important in the
future, I lived my life like a normal human being inside a
popular neighborhood since I was born. I came here, and
my life was like in Morocco. Its’s all about love playing and
going out with friends. once time I had dreams that I am
becoming a player football, and also love to run fast and I
was the fastest one in the school, I threw the palms of
running. I always like going out with my friends. I can’t stay
cooped up in the house. I lived there with my mom,
dad,and sister with my grandmother. We were waiting for
my father to get enough money. We bought a house close
to my grandmother's house and has become to me an
incident remains in greasy, So far I've fallen from the 3ired
floor into first floor, and everyone was feared. My
neighborhood thought something happen to me, but my
father and mother and took me to the hospital doctor tell to
my father that im good enough And then entered the
school and I had problems with my first, but I worked hard
in recent years in front of me the goal and placed a
success and then behind the year year succeeded and
after we moved to the new house changed everything for
me has entered a new school and Aatart new friends and
everything was variable for me because I loved my
grandmother's house, how I do not like a house my father
was born, the first house she saw my eyes and
understanding lived 7 years But I adapted to the
atmosphere quickly because I found real friends and rely
on them, and then we Onaoasedkaúa feels like one we
were in the same age in the same school in the same
grade and we Nhvd our lessons together we meet all of us
in one house and every one of reviewing all of his lessons
and after each one says what Hvdah to the other in order
to error handling and the problem we have in the study are
math and physics and French and was the most difficult
Materials in the entire study. Most of the students suffered
from weakness in this topic Atalath materials When I
arrived the ninth year in the study was a difficult year and
worked hard and succeeded where so much so that when I
came to America to study They told me the result must
come, but I left it in Morocco But is not a problem as long
as designer goals will no obstacle standing in front of me

and will succeed again, thanks to my father and my mother
calls, but when I got to America changed everything for me
because alienation be difficult But after the passage of time
becomes a human get used to something and then entered
the school and the school was nicer than I expected, but at
first everything was strange for me, but that with the
passage of days the rights become accustomed to the
place and get used to his new life after all this Aatart to
work in order to learn how to How is life and take
responsibility because nothing comes the plain in this topic
minimum everything comes with hard work and after all
these hyper I used to live here and Aktar thing I loved it

here, it is a study which filled the void I felt my father here

3 comments:

  1. I like your immigration story, but I think you should try adding more details about the characters in your story.

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  2. good story, but you have to add more details. And you have to fix your spelling!

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  3. You have to put the punctuation correct and you have to improve your spelling

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