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Sunday, April 26, 2015

55 Bilal Saeed (Pakistan, Age 14): English

Bilal saeed.
I was born in 11th oct 2000 in gujrat. it is the city of Pakistan . When I was 7 years old I started prayer.I woke up at 6,0 clock.and i take bath daily.then i go to school.i go to school at 7,0 clock.I came back from school at 2 o'clock.then I take some rest. Then I receive my all subjects. Then I do dinner at night. I slept at 7:00 pm.Gujrat is the big city.It is also very beatiful city. I play cricket at every sunday. At 7:00 am I go to ground for play with my friends. I play cricket from 7:00 to 11:00 am. I play cricket only on sunday.

I go to school when  i was of 3 years old. I go to jinnah high school.Then I  go to dar-e-arqam school.I have many friends in this school.There are many teachers in this school.I like this school very much.This is one of the good school of gujrat.
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2 comments:

  1. JaishaApril 30, 2015 at 6:59 PM

    Good! But you need more effort and focus on your memoir and write more about your family and your immigration.

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  2. AnonymousMay 1, 2015 at 6:49 AM

    You explain your country with many details.
    Correct grammer mistakes and add more details about how you came to U.S.A.

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