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Help us improve our memoirs!
In this project, we have created our personal memoirs in both English and our native languages. To share our work, we have uploaded a written and oral version so that many people can enjoy our work!
The work presented is still in draft form, and we will continue to improve the quality of our work through the feedback and questions provided by readers/listeners! Please comment with compliments, suggestions and questions for us.
[All names have been changed to protect student privacy and all comments will be moderated by school staff.]
GOOD JOB
ReplyDeleteYou did great job! But you need talk clear.
ReplyDeletethe memoir was good because you explained it very well while speaking but you could have wrote neatly so i could have understood what you wrote in urdu.
ReplyDeleteThat was a great story and I believe that you did a great job and you could have said a little more about your plans in the U.S
ReplyDeleteyou did a great job to explain about your family but
ReplyDeleteI think you should talk about you school, like teachers or friends or if you have enemy.