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Sunday, April 26, 2015

356 Azamat (Uzbekistan, Age 15): English

Hello: My name is Azamat. I am 15 years old. I am from Uzbekistan. Uzbekistan country is good and beautiful. In my city my house is very big and nice I like my country because I have a lot my friends. In Uzbekistan I am playing with my friends Soccer, Basketball and Baseball. In Uzbekistan I lived with my family. I like Uzbekistan. In September 2009s my dad, my mom, my brother and my 2 sisters come to United States. And my feel getting sad because my dad and my mom they are come to United States. After my dad, my dad, my brother and my 2 sister come to America. And I stay in Uzbekistan with my grandmother.
My Grandmother she nice. She is 74 years old. In Uzbekistan I am living well with my Grandmother, Grandfather, Uncle and my uncle wife. My Grandmother and my Grandfather is so nice because I am living with her they are not says bad words too me. My uncle is he nice because every night I am going with him to for playing video games and to 5d games. I am going every time to eat shish kabob and fish and any food. My uncle wife is she good because she helps to me for wash clothing’s and for math homework. My uncle is he learned to drive the car and in Uzbekistan. I am else drive the car in the city. In Uzbekistan I am living with my uncle, Grandmother, Grandfather and my uncle wife we are living so well. I am happy to living good with my uncle. I like my house in Uzbekistan because it is so big. I can play in side th house basketball, hide then seek or any game.
In Uzbekistan I am going to school. In school I have lot friends. In my country the school is big. I like my school because in school have lot fun. My school is good. In my country I like the English class and Russian class because they are Gonne help me. I like the more English classes because I like the other country languages. First take the English classes it is fun to learn and talk. The Russian class is not hard to learn because I go to Russian country 1y 3 months that’s way it is not hard that much. And I like the any classes.
MY mom she come to back in Uzbekistan November 2012s. After my mom she comes to Uzbekistan then I am so happy. After my mom she Uzbekistan she go to Tashkent five times to fix te Visa. The Tashkent is very big and beautiful city. We are waiting for Visa to take months. It is hard to fix the Visa because it is takes long time. After my mom she fix the Visa and she is so happy.
In February 02/03/2013 I am coming in United States. The first time it is difficult because I don’t know nothing .After I come o here my mom and my dad they are take me to Park and Manhattan .I come to United States I am happy because it is the first time in my life.
After I come here I go to school. When I go to school I don’t know nothing my friends they are gone help me. The teachers are gone teach to learn English and I come to before school for learn something. When I am not understood something my friends are helps me. The school is very big in school they are have lot students. In middle school I like the teachers and the math class. And I found lot friends. I like the school because It is help full. In middle school I pass the test the test is very hard.
Now In International H.S is a good high school because I like the school. In this I like the any class because I am learn lot things. The school is help to student’s lot because they are learning a lot and English.

Now we are living with my family. In my family have 7 peoples. I am happy because we are living everybody in my family. I have lot friends I am play with my friends every time Soccer and Basketball. My friends are nice and good. In summer I go with my friends to Manhattan and to beach we are going to anywhere. The first time I come to here I don’t have friends and my feels are bad. Now I have a lot friends I am happy. I go to school. In school take sport the sport name is wrestling. Now I go to Taekwondo I like this sport because I win to much for fights. I am living know very good and I am to happy.

3 comments:

  1. I like how you give details about you family

    I think you have to remember tell something like (where and when)

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  2. I think you did great job you give more details what you interest about sport and games but you should give more about characters.

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  3. I think your story is good if you write more details about you character and that would be very interesting story.

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